
Need to benefit from a critical eye (or ear) on your pitch and pres? Looking to pass the ‘clarity test’ as well as the corporates do? Or just don’t know how to start your business story?
Research across 1.3 million investor sessions shows that 31% of readers bounce within the first ten seconds. If your story doesn’t build belief and convey credibility, you’ve likely lost before you even begin.
With 30 years in competitive corporate comms, I’m offering a \\\"Pitch Doctor\\\" service designed to help brilliant builders translate technical complexity into the institutional-grade clarity that audiences demand:- shifting you from a “maker mindset\\\" to a communicator one.
Wherever you are in the process, for £125 I will provide two hours input, either:
“Hands off’ - on Document Review & Recommendations
You send your pitch for analysis. I identify \\\"red flags\\\"—from \\\"jargon soup\\\" to tech-first framing—and provide tactical feedback to ensure your narrative delivers and your “Mission to Money\\\" logic shines through.
or:
“Hands on’ - a Live Pitch ‘Surgery’
You send me your slides then I sit through your live run-through, followed by a slide-by-slide discussion. Together, we’ll refine your delivery and deck - moving audiences from initial interest to deep conviction.
Underpinned by my Clarity, Consistency, and Connection framework, we’ll bridge the builder-communicator gap, ensuring you sound as strong as your business can be.
Take the first step to successfully starting and growing your business.