
Need to benefit from a critical eye (or ear) on your pitch and pres? Looking to pass the ‘clarity test’ as well as the corporates do? Or just don’t know how to start your business story?
Research across 1.3 million investor sessions shows that 31% of readers bounce within the first ten seconds. If your story doesn’t build belief and convey credibility, you’ve likely lost before you even begin.
With 30 years in competitive corporate comms, I’m offering a Pitch Doctor service designed to help brilliant builders translate technical complexity into the institutional-grade clarity that audiences demand.
More than just \"use these words to win\" advice; together we'll make sure you own your business story - shifting you from maker to communicator mode.
Wherever you are in the process, for £125 I will provide two hours input, whether that's:
Hands off - Review & Recommendations
You send your pitch for analysis, I identify any red flags and provide tactical feedback to ensure your narrative delivers and your Mission to Money logic shines through.
or:
Hands on - a live Pitch Surgery
You send me your slides then I sit through your live run-through, followed by a slide-by-slide discussion. Together, we’ll refine your delivery and deck - helping audiences move from initial interest to conviction.
or: a handy structure to help you get started.
With my Clarity, Consistency, and Connection framework as a foundation, we’ll bridge the builder-communicator gap, ensuring you sound as strong as your business can be.
Take the first step to successfully starting and growing your business.